chevening career plan essay

The development of creative and cultural industries in Viet Nam - Chevening - Career Plan Essay

Building a self-sustainable cultural community.

Maria - / 1096   Oct 24, 2019   #2 @pionpt Hello there. Thanks for being in the forum! We'll be more than happy to assist you if you have more questions. For now, I'll give you feedback on this essay. Firstly, the first paragraph of the essay is quite put-together. I appreciate how you were able to explain things without pushing too hard, a trait that will be appreciated by your readers in the long-run. When you're dealing with evaluators, it is always important to show that you have expertise in whatever topic you're reaching out on. The second paragraph, however, needs to be trimmed down a little bit. I would recommend that you try to utilize more effective writing techniques such as focusing more on the value of the writing rather than on the composition per say. Try your best to not introduce new data on the conclusion. Rather, this portion should only be dedicated to giving a comprehensive summation and a brief analysis of what your application entails. Best of luck!